peer assessment of storyboard

Peer assessment comments;
positive

• It is apparent in the story board of what the genre is in the movie. You can tell this by the choice of colors and the chosen shots.
• There is a good amount of titles and credits and they are appropriate

Neggitive

• The mise on scene needs to be more appropriate and relevant to the theme. Such as a scary old house to fit with the horror theme
• The non diegetic sound needs to be effective and fit with the chosen genre.

What i am going to do to improve my work 

To change my work to make it better and get a better grade i am going to change the mise on scene. Firstly im going to change the setting that i am going to use when filming. I am going to look for a place that fits with the horror theme, so therefore i want to find a place that is scary such as an obandened house or an old cottage. Also i am going to try and choose a better veriety of shots that i choose whilst filming. Another thing i need to do is make some good non diogetic music that i will use when the titels are on the screen, that will fit with the theme.